My .02 worth.
1) Logo usage, color scheme - Page 1 I suggest we use the official logo in the upper right corner instead of the present rectangle. Also suggest using a color that matches or is complementary with the colors of the logo.
2) Page 3, Section 4, paragraph a - Based on the beginning of the dues year being 11/1, the six month date is May 1, not April 1. April 1 should be changed to May 1. Same applies to paragraph b as well.
3) Page 7, Section 1, paragraph b - Incorrect word used. Suite should be suit.
4) Page 8, Article IX, second paragraph - Typo Mindsorganization should be Minds organization.
See attached for highlighted areas of concern (except for logo and color scheme comment)
If these changes are made, then I will vote yes.